I took my degree of Doctor of Medicine in the University of London, and proceeded to Netley to go through the course arranged for doctors in the army.
take sb. degree of… 获得…样的学位
proceed to do sth. 继续做某事
arranged for 安排在。。。
在伦敦大学我获得了医学学位，继续去Netley这边学习，通过一些课程之后被安排在一个军队中当医生。
My regiment was stationed in India at the time, and berfore I could join it, the Secibd Afghan war had broken out.
我的团驻扎在印度的时候，当我可以加入它的时候，第二次阿富汗战争开始了。
There I was struck on the shouder by a bullet, which shattered the bone.
那颗击碎了我骨头的子弹击中了我的肩膀。
With permission from a caring government, I spent the next nine months in attempting to improve my health.
With permission from… 经过。。。的允许
in attempting to 尝试做莫事
经过政府的关心和允许之后，我花了九个月尝试恢复我的身体。
On the very day that I had come to this conclusion I was standing at the Criterion Bar, when someone tapped me on the shoulder.
一天我正站在一个酒吧里考虑这个问题的时候，一个人从背后拍拍我的肩膀。
He asked，“What are you up to now?”
他问你现在怎么样？
Trying to solve the problem of whether it is possible to get comfortable rooms at a reasonable price.
尝试去解决能否找到一个舒适而且价格合适的房子的问题
“You don’t know Sherlock Holmes yet,”he said ,”perhaps you world not care for him as a constant companion”
你肯定之前不认识夏洛克，他说，可能你不会和他成为长期的伙伴的。
只是用于英文翻译练习，如有翻译的不对的地方，或者不合理的地方，感谢指出。