一、简单句的满分表达
1、被动
当汉语中出现我们、人们、大家或有人等人称代词做主语时,都可以写成被动。
被动句型推荐在第一段的最后一句话,引出文章中心时使用,或者是第三段的第一句话,文章总结的时候使用。(使用一次就够了)
举例1:我们应该孝敬父母
parent should be respected by us.
superiors are supposed to be respected by their descendants.
单词替换:
①parent----->superiors(父母,长辈,上司)/ the elderly/ senior citizens.
②should----->ought to/ be supposed to(应该做)/ be obliged to(有责任有义务做,带强制的感情色彩)
③we、us和people的替换----->human beings/ the public/ private individuals
写作时要注意单词的准确性!!1
1)我们不应该盲目追星 我们------>teenagers and youngsters.
2)我们应该节约 undergraduates(本科生)、youngsters on campus(大学生)
3)我们应该孝敬父母 children/ kids/ offspring(子孙后代,单复数同形不加s)/ descendants(子孙后代)
4)人们应该讲诚信 businessmen
5)我们应该有自信 all children and adults/ men and women in all walks(各行各业的男男女女们)
6)我们应该关注环境问题 experts and professors
示例2、我们不应该盲目追星
celebrities (名人;明星) should not be pursued by youngsters.
not的替换:------never /by no means/ under no circumstances/ fail to(★)
示例3、污染很严重
environmental contamination is though very serious by increasing amount of experts and professors.
pollution-----> environmental contamination
think------> maintain/ claim/assume/ be of the opinion that/ cling to the perspective that
very-----> distinctly /remarkably/ exceedingly/ outstandingly/ strikingly/ extraordinarily [ɪksˈtrɔːdnrɪli] (选三个记忆)
serious----> fatal/ grave/ severe/ fearful/ be of great severity
2、there be句型
there exists/seem/remain(都翻译成有)
示例1:
有很多的原因解释我的观点
There exist many reasons to explain my idea.
本句型推荐写在第二段的第一节话引出原因分析的时候使用,或者是第三段的最后一句话喊口号的时候使用。
Many ----a sea of/ a multitude of/ a host of / a train of /an army of 许多、大量
-----immense(巨大的) amounts of
-----numerous
Reasons---causes/factors/elements
Explain---account for /give rise to/contribute to/be responsible for 产生、导致、致使
Idea----outlook/viewpoint
3、比较句型
① as...as...和...一样 (原级的比较)
只要作文中出现形容词或副词的地方都能写出as...as..句型
本句型推荐写在第一段的最后一句话引出文章中心的时候使用,或者是第三段第一句话,文章总结的时候使用。
示例1:她很漂亮
She is as beautiful as a red rose, which managed to take away the breath of a sea of children and adults. 她能成功带走很多人的呼吸。
be动词的替换(不适合被动和现在进行时,此时be作为助动词)------
①look/taste/sound/feel...所有的感官动词都可以替换be动词 seem、 appear(好像,似乎)
②keep, remain
③become,get
④prove
Beautiful----graceful/ elegant/ attractive/ charming/ gorgeous(美丽到极致)
示例2:自信很重要
Confidence proves as important as sunshine, which plays an essential role in the normal growth of all creatures.
Important-----vital/crucial/critical/indispensable/significant
------be of great importance
------be of great importance
示例3:过渡捕捞很严重
Sth becomes as grave as AIDS,which has threatened the health of patients or taken away their lives.